新托福的独立写作部分要求考生的语言使用恰当,不过即便考生的词汇使用时有一些小错误,他的文章也可以得到。但是如果同时还有一些语法错误的话,那么就很难让阅卷者准确理解句子的意图,这个时候文章的得分就会比较低。另外,经分析发现,若考生只是使用一些简单句和简单的词汇,那么他是无法来阐述较为复杂的问题的,而当文章的句子和单词过于简单时,得分往往不会超过3分。 Last month,I had a dispute with my parent. It started as a simple conversation that turned into an argument. I wanted to take a year off from school. Of course,my parents argued that I should stay in school. I tried to reason with them and I tried to persuade them that taking a year off from school and working would be valuable experience. My explanation fell on deaf ears,and they refused to let me continue the discussion. They felt I had not thoroughly examined the issue and saw no reason to debate the subject any longer。 这段文字里划线的几处作者想要表达“讨论”或者它的近义词,通过巧妙地变换了词汇,使整个段落不让人感到乏味。这种语言表达的方式在独立写作里是非常实用的。我们再来看看以下这个例子: He is rich。 这个句子的问题在于rich这个形容词太含糊,他到底多有钱?从这个句子里我们无法看出。因此在独立写作中考生要尽量避免使用含糊的形容词,能够具体的尽量要具体些。比如上面的那个句子我们可以写成: He owns a large company and has an annual income of 20 million dollars。 (责任编辑:sailor) |