2023年9月23日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文： 动态图(线图)

　　大作文： Some people think that dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试 难度中等。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：动态图(line)线图是1980-2010年不同年龄段人群去博物馆一年一次及以上的百分比。

　　注意：1. 注意动态图的分段逻辑问题，以及动态特征点是否抓取完整。2. 注意正文段落是否将趋势变化的信息所呈现的特点清晰展示出来。3.线图为动态图，要注意除了动态表达以外，还要做出恰当的横向对比，提高题目的回应度。相关表达：

　　1. A +increase/decline steadily from +数据1 +to +数据2+ in three years.

　　2. A+ start at 数据1，and then drop to the bottom at 数据2

　　3. A +decrease sharply in 时间，plunging to just +数据

　　Task 2 ：社会类

　　题目翻译：有些人认为危险的极限运动，如跳伞，攀岩应该被禁止。对此你在何种程度同意或不同意?

　　该话题虽然比较日常化，与实际生活比较贴近，但内容对于考生而言有一定难度，需要考生明确极限运动的优势和弊端，保证充足的论据，从而分别进行论证。论据及论点的思考是本题的难点，要注意对于问题的回应是否充足，一般在同意与否类型的题目中，倾向于写部分同意的写法更容易发挥，但本题也适合写成持不同意的立场。以下推荐一个四段式的写法：

　　**段：题目改写，给出观点

　　In this new age world, there are numerous amount of sports that we get to see. Some masses believe, that descending from the sky and mountaineering are dangerous, and hence there should be a ban on them. I completely disagree with their opinion and will support my view with examples.

　　第二段：论证极限运动的风险，同时提出完全禁止是不切实际的

　　On one hand, there are some outdoor activities that are considered threatening.(给出本段主旨句，提出极限运动的风险). Some of them are bungee jumping, rock climbing and diving from the sky.(举例蹦极，攀岩，跳伞等) However, most of them have some risks associated. For instance, football players have a risk of getting a concussion and F1 drivers might get into a fatal accident because of the speed with which they drive. (因为在运动的过程中受伤的风险更高，且致命性高)I believe people should have the freedom to enjoy sports according to their liking. Putting a ban on them, not only takes the privilege away from the citizens but Also takes away the livelihood of some.(任命应该根据自己的喜好选择运动的类型，完全禁止不仅剥夺公民的权利，而且会导致有些人失去维持生计的方法)

　　第三段：极限运动不需要被禁止的原因

　　On the other hand, such activities require dedication and practice on a large scale.(这样的运动其实需要很大程度上的投入与练习) In addition, there are rigorous training and certification sessions, that are mandatory for those who are interested. (除此之外，严格的训练都是强制性的)For example, institutions conducting these programs are recognized by the government and have a set of rules and regulations that need to be followed.(从事这些运动培训的机构都是由政府的一系列规章制度来监管的) As a result, their teaching programs are of high standards. Furthermore, while performing these activities there is a guide always presented with them.(从事该运动同时会有指导在旁边)

　　第四段：总结

　　In conclusion, although some sports entertainments are considered to be fatal, in my opinion, they should not be banned because the administrative body takes enough steps to ensure that they are safe to pursue, and individuals have all the right to follow any sport according to their wish.

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：重点关注饼图、柱状图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注教育、科技话题。

　　3.重点浏览2018,2019年写作机经，可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。