2024年3月16日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文： 静态图(饼图)

　　大作文： Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试 难度中等。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：静态图(pie)两个饼图，有关1958和2008人们在白天做的各项活动的时间占比(工作和睡觉占比***大)。

　　注意：1. 静态图要注意审题，充足体现对比关系，占比的表达要准确。2. 注意正文段落是否将不同活动之间的的关系所呈现的特点清晰展示出来。3.静态图要注意对比关系的多样性表达，同时有整体的概括型，不可写成流水账。相关表达：

　　占据(动词)：account for/ occupy/take up/make up/constitute + 数%

　　比例(名词)：proportion / rate / percentage

　　A +比较级+ than + B with 数据1 and 数据2 respectively

　　A +be动词+数据1，which +be动词+比较级+B(数据2)

　　A+***高级+with+数据+among all the +剩余对象

　　Task 2 ：教育类

　　题目翻译：在很多国家，大学没有足够的人选择有关科学的**。为什么?对社会会有哪些影响?

　　该话题根据科学**的特性来推断选择该类科目人少的原因，需要考生注意一些相关话题词的规范使用，保证充足的论据，从而分别进行论证。起因类的题目建议能够有至少两方面的原因，另外论证影响的段落建议写至少两个影响。以下推荐一个四段式的写法：

　　**段：题目改写，给出观点

　　In contemporary world, some countries have witnessed a shortage of students opting for science curriculum in colleges. There are two principal reasons resulting in this phenomenon, and it would have some notable impacts on society.

　　第二段：论证不在大学选择科**目的原因

　　The first cause which discourages youngsters from enrolling in science subjects is low earning potential.(**个原因是较低的收效) In some countries, workers working for science fields would be not only controlled by the government,(在一些国家，科学相关的工作由政府来控制) but they also receive salaries from it, which are not high as from private or multinational corporations.(同时普遍收入也没有那么高 )For example, according to the survey in 2021, some Vietnam's scientists researching agriculture or forest gained a monthly amount of 10 million Vietnamese Dong, which was insufficient to meet all basic demands in their lives. (举例说明)Secondly, some education systems produce ineffective outcomes.(第二个原因是教育形式不够有效) To be precise, exam-driven curriculum in some states does not provide learners with hands-on experiences, (重例论轻实践)which deprives them of several opportunities to apply for high-profile organizations or lets them face confusion at work.(难以胜任工作)

　　第三段：论证带来的社会影响

　　Regarding significant impacts, firstly, this tendency leads to a strong reduction of beneficial initiatives satisfying the population's needs.(不能满足人们的需求，对生活产生影响) For instance, if the authorities make a decision on create viable solutions to deal with consequences of climate change, this could be impossible to be undertaken due to a lack of qualified scientists who refuse the government's low financial investment.(当遇到一些需要解决的科学问题，没有充足的专业人员) The second impact is the administration's weakened credibility in society.(会失去人们对社会的可靠度) For example, civilians tend to believe in science field of other countries because their universities attract a high number of outstanding students over the world. Thereby, they would consume science's products produced by those countries rather than their ones.(因为自己的国家没有杰出的科学家，所以人们会信任别的国家，也只会消费别的国家的科学产品)

　　第四段：总结

　　In conclusion, low income and inappropriate university course prevent a large number of students from accessing to science subjects in several nations. Consequently, this leads to a shortage of qualified employees in those countries, and lessen their credibility in society.

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：重点关注柱状图、线图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注科技，政府类话题。

　　3.重点浏览2018,2019年写作机经，可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。