2024年8月3日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文：动态柱图

　　大作文：Some students choose to work or travel after leaving school and before going to university. Many people, however, say that working experience is more useful in adult life than traveling.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试 难度一般。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：动态柱图(the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future)

　　注意：

　　1. 本题为常规动态图，关于城市化情况数据。考生们在写overview的时候可以给出整体对比信息，再去进行细节信息的比较，务必要**明确的分段思路。

　　2. 柱图比较简单，但要注意全文的时态表达，该图中存在将来的时间，所以要注意使用预测表达be projected/predicted to…。

　　3. 要注意在表达时先概述世界的情况，再去区分看每个区域的情况去比较

　　相关表达：

　　The whole decade witnessed a sharp increase in…

　　There was a sharp increase in…

　　The percentage of ...was the highest, increasing from…to…

　　A is major/main/principal/dominant makeup/item…

　　The percentage of..is relatively higher.

　　It is estimated that it will increase/decrease to…

　　…accounted for the highest percentage/the largest proportion.

　　A tops the list, followed by/far ahead of B.

　　Task 2 ：教育类话题

　　题目翻译：有的人认为，学生在**毕业，去大学之间的gap year，可以选择去旅游或者工作，但有人觉得对成年人来说，工作经验比旅行更重要。你是否同意这个观点?

　　从话题上来说，属于教育类话题，这是相对来说比较简单的话题，难度并不算大，并且也是同学们比较熟悉的方面。在思考观点的过程中，要注意审题中对于两种类型的历史课的比较，要凸显出到底重要在哪里，短期的还是长期的。

　　从类型上来说，属于同意与否的文章，需要考虑清楚totally、partly之间的不同答法及文章的框架结构;

　　参考写法：

　　**段：题目改写+partly agree

　　第二段：的确，有工作经验是比较重要的。

　　第三段：但是，这并不意味着旅行就没有那么重要了。

　　第四段：重申自己的态度(同样重要)。

　　题目思路：

　　主体段 1: Admittedly，working experience is useful in adult life. This is mainly because students can have a basic understanding about themselves and what they might be competent in the future. If so, they may choose the appropriate major in the university; Secondly, the right connections or networking they have in the work might has a positive effects on their future career-making. Some of them can provide them right guidance.

　　主体段 2：However, it is of the same significance to travel during this period. When making the travel schedule, their ability of arranging time, allocating money and interpersonal skill can all be enhanced; Secondly, if they travel around, they will have a complete recognition about the world and people, help to form an independent value (analyzing things from different aspects), and finally realize what they really desire from the bottom of heart. 可以适当举例

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：多复习基础数据图;

　　2.大作文：重点关注媒体、科技，社会发展类话题。