必须学会的新托福短句用法

        在新托福写作中有个误区，就是经常会有同学觉得自己写的句子很完美却不能拿，其实长句难句并不是新托福写作里的好句子，短句确实是新托福写作里不能不会的句子，以下南京朗阁小编为大家整理了托福写作短句子的实例，看看是不是比长句子舒服多了?

　　Good writing usually contains a variety of sentence lengths to make the writing more interesting. Too many short sentences often make the writing choppy sounding.

　　原文：

　　It was my birthday. I knew there would be a party. There was something in the air. I was nervous, but excited. They didn’t disappoint me. I walked in my house. All my friends yelled, “Surprise.”

　　修正版：

　　As it was my birthday, I had a feeling my friends would throw me a party. I wasn’t disappointed.

　　When I walked in my house, all my friends yelled, “Surprise!”

　　原文：

　　America has many important people. Benjamin Franklin was a “founding father.” He helped write the Declaration of Independence. He also invented many things. He invented bifocals. He invented the Franklin stove. He discovered electricity.

　　修正版：

　　Benjamin Franklin, who was one ofAmerica’s“founding fathers,” helped write the Declaration of Independence. He also invented many things such as bifocals, the Franklin stove and he discovered electricity.