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2. 分词短语作状语的错误 Holding her in his arms, the moon hid behind the cloud. As soon as the moon hid behind the cloud, he held her in his arms. 3. 修饰词错位 (1) Romeo received word that Juliet was dead from another messenger. Romeo received word from another messenger that Juliet was dead. (2) After leaving the stage, the audience’s applause called the musicians back for an encore. After the musicians left the stage, the audience’s applause called them back for an encore. (3) Disruptive in the classroom, a teacher may become exasperated with hyperactive children. Disruptive in the classroom, hyperactive children may exasperate a teacher. 4. 串句 Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization, for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance, but when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers. Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization; for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance. But when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers. 5. 时态错误 The researchers admitted that they falsified crucial data in the study. The researchers admitted that they had falsified crucial data in the study. 6. 代词错误 (1) Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take it our on others. Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take them our on others. (2) Each girl and boy must do their part to keep the home fires burning. Each girl and boy must do her or his part to keep the home fires burning. (3) This college has their own entrance requirements. This college has its own entrance requirements. (4) If one wishes to participate in the political process, you can begin by voting regularly. If one wishes to participate in the political process, one can begin by voting regularly. (5) The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, they thought an unhappy employee might have started it. The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, the library staff thought an unhappy employee might have started it. 7. 结构混乱 Because Hemingway’s style is simple makes his writing accessible to all readers. Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to all readers. Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers. 现在报名南京朗阁雅思托福校内班享受85折优惠，团报低至8折，2018年8月25日之前报名朗阁秋季课程可享受88折优惠，还有以下礼品： 1、报名就送课程预习包一份 2、报名送朗阁精美拎袋一只 3、报名中心课程满2万元及以上送4小时VIP一对一课程 4、报名中心课程3万元及以上送8小时VIP一对一课程+2980的临行口语班 5、免费赠送“考试不过险”，考费无忧 6、享受朗阁免费代报名服务 点击在线咨询或拨打电话025-83236520免费领取优惠和试听课! (责任编辑：Judy) |
