2022年12月3日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文：表格

　　大作文：Some people think watching television is bad for children in every day. Others think it is good for children to get knowledge. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试小作文为2017年7月9日旧题翻新，除了年份更新成2022年，其他无太大差别;大作文为科技类话题，难度不大。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：表格

　　The table below shows the percentage of GDP occupied by health spending in five different countries in 2022.

　　以下为考生回忆图形整理, 近期需要参加考试的考生们可以尝试练笔。

　　静态图常用表达：

　　1. The most … gap could be seen in …

　　2. … rank the top/rank first/top the list

　　3. …, followed by …

　　4. …. Next came b, which was slightly higher than c

　　5. Compared with the percentage of public spending, that of private one showed a slightly different picture, where ….

　　Task 2 ：科技类话题

　　本题为雅思写作常考科技类话题，是关于每天看电视会存在的利弊讨论。

　　本题为讨论类题目，考生们在写作时可以有自己的立场(既可以中立，也可以表达倾向)，此处老师给出一些可能的思路。

　　题目思路：

　　可能会带来的坏处：

　　1. 长时间看电子屏幕(excessive screen time)对孩子的身体健康无益(adversely affect their health, exert detrimental influence on …)，例如视力疲劳可能会导致近视问题(nearsighted)，缺乏运动会导致超重甚至肥胖问题(obesity);2. 电视内容中包含一些不当内容，例如暴力行为，扭曲的价值观等会导致孩子三观受到影响。尤其是现如今的父母通常忙于工作以至于没有太多时间引导孩子，如果孩子观看了较多不当电视内容，后患无穷。(They are worried that the wrong kind of TV programs, especially those with inappropriate contents such as violent images can spoil the mindset of children. Because their brains, habits, and values are developing at a critical time, misbehavior and distorted viewpoints on TV may easily lead children to a misguided development.)

　　有助于孩子获取知识：

　　电视确实能够给孩子带来很多有效信息，如果父母能够稍微把控下孩子所看的内容的话。(However, television can be informative and educational when parents have control over what programs children are allowed to access. )1. 现如今，有很多优质的适龄的节目能够帮助孩子探索外面的世界，尤其是对于忙于学习没有时间外出或者经济基础一般的孩子们来说尤为重要。与此同时，没有时间和空间的限制。(Today, there are many well-produced age-appropriate programs that aim to help children who are curious about new experience to perceive the world around them.) 2. 相较于其他信息来源，电视节目将生动的图片和音效融为一体，对于孩子们来说更具吸引力。(Besides, compared with other sources of information, with vivid pictures and sound effects, TV can be a more appealing way for children to obtain knowledge since they have shorter attention span than adults. )

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：重点关注表格、柱图、线图

　　2.大作文：重点关注科技、政府、教育话题。

　　3.重点浏览2018-2019年写作机经，可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。