2023年8月19日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文： 组合图(线图+表格)

　　大作文： Some people think more public money should be spent on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试 难度中等。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：组合图(line+table)线图是平均工作时长，各时间段比较; 表格是带薪休假的平均天数

　　注意：1. 注意组合图的分段逻辑问题，以及组合图之间是否存在相互联系。2. 注意正文段落是否将趋势变化的信息所呈现的特点清晰展示出来。3.线图为动态图，要注意除了动态表达以外，还要做出恰当的横向对比，提高题目的回应度。相关表达：

　　1. A +increase/decline steadily from +数据1 +to +数据2+ in three years.

　　2. A+ start at 数据1，and then drop to the bottom at 数据2

　　3. A +decrease sharply in 时间，plunging to just +数据

　　Task 2 ：政府类

　　题目翻译：有些人认为公共资金相比于投入在修建公共交通上，更多的应该投入在修建新的公路上面。对此你在何种程度同意或不同意?

　　该话题属于政府类，虽然是比较老套的话题，但内容对于考生而言有一定难度，需要考生区分修建公路与公共交通两种概念，从而进行论证。论据及论点的思考是本题的难点，要注意对于问题的回应是否充足，一般在政府类话题中，我们都倾向于与普通人生活更相关的项目，比较容易论证。以下推荐一个四段式的写法：

　　**段：题目改写，给出观点

　　It is argued that money should be spent on developing roads and motorways rather than on public Transport systems. Personally, I think both thoroughfare and public transportation systems have vital roles to play in modern society, and therefore should be equally invested in.

　　第二段：论证投资公路修建的优势

　　1. 公路修建可以大大提高道路安全以及缓解交通堵塞(On the one hand, better roadway quality increases the level of safety and reduces traffic congestion.)

　　2. 用具体的事例论证(In many cities and provinces in Vietnam, for example，the number of subway accidents has been ever-increasing because there are a lot of holes on the trail’s surface. This is a clear evidence that the government should spend money improving the quality of boulevard systems in order to ensure the safety of people)

　　3. 进一步论证公路的修建带来的实际好处(Additionally, building wider roads and more motorways in big cities like Ha Chi Minh, where traffic congestion is still a major problem, will help to increase thoroughfare capacity. It means that there will be more space for a larger number of vehicles, Hence reducing pressure on the city’s main roads as well as congestion.)

　　第三段：公共交通同样也能带来很多益处

　　On the other hand, better public transport systems are beneficial for the environment and people who do not have a private vehicle.(公共交通对于环境友好且对没有私家车的人来说有好处) In fact, some modes of public transport like subways produce less pollutants than cars and other private vehicles. (公共交通产生的污染物相比于汽车要少)Therefore, spending money providing people with access to public transport will improve air quality and reduce pollution. Furthermore, for those who do not have a private vehicle, such as motorbike or car, buses and subways are a great choice if they have to travel every day.(对于每天要出行的人来说，公共交通是更好的选择)

　　第四段：总结

　　By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirmed the position that, money should be well-spent on not only the road but also public transport systems.

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：重点关注饼图、折线图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注教育、科技话题。

　　3.重点浏览2018,2019年写作机经，可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。