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2017年2月18日雅思考试写作回顾

时间:2017-02-20 14:02来源:朗阁小编作者:don

2017218日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文:地图题(变迁题)

大作文:Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

朗阁讲师吴凡点评:

1.本次考试难度适中

2.整体分析

Task 1:地图题(变迁题)

注意:1.不同年份的地图分开描述变化,需要掌握基本的方位描述方法;2.注意时态,各个图时间不一样,时态也可能会不一样;3.起始年份的地图当中涵盖的内容需要详细展开,后期只需要提及发生变化的区域或建筑。

相关表达:

1、a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmlandin the middle

2、the size of farmland and woods was reduced by half

3、farms and woods completely disappeared

4、a road was constructed linking the river to the residences

 

3.Task 2科技类话题

题目翻译:有些人认为科技让生活变得复杂,所以我们应该简化生活,不使用科技。你同不同意?

从话题上来说,属于科技类话题,难度不大。

从类型上来说,题目实质是想让考生衡量技术发展或进步给生活带来的利弊。观点一定要明确,并且注意论证的详细程度。

从结构上来说,可以通过四段完成写作任务:

段:改写题目+个人观点(不同意放弃技术)

第二段:让步段,承认技术进步引起了一些问题

第三段:反驳,技术进步和发展带来的好处远大于坏处

第四段:重申个人观点

 

Introduction:

如今,科技的进步不论在生活还是工作方面为人们提供了巨大的方便。These days, the advances of technology have provided impressive convenience for the public, no matter it is in life or work.有些人可能会担心科技进步会带来多问题,人们的生活也不应该依靠技术的帮助。Some people may concern that this progress brings more trouble, and life should be independent of technological assistance. 然而,在我看来,这很不明智。However, in my view, this is not a wise policy.

Body 1:

Ts:尽管科技进步产生了积极影响,但它还是带来了一些不可否认的问题。In spite of the positive effects of technology, it has brought some undeniable problems.

Ss: 比如环境问题就是科技进步带来的 为严重的副作用之一。Environmental complaints, for example, are one of the most severe side effects.科技发展在很多产业都很普遍,但是处理污染问题却很难,这就导致了我们生存环境的恶化。It is easy to notice technology development in many industries, but they find it difficult to cope with pollution, which is to blame for the deterioration of our living conditions. 另外,电脑和网络的逐渐普及也极大地简化了生活和工作,但是对孩子不一定是有利的。Also, the growing availability of computers and the Internet has greatly simplified life and work, but it is not always beneficial to the well-being of children. 换句话说,频繁接触电脑或者网络游戏可能不仅会损害视力,还会误导孩子,让他们变得自以为是,待人冷漠。Put another way, frequent exposure to screens or online games may not only be damaging to their eyesight, but also mislead them into being self-centered and insensitive to their surroundings.

Body 2:

Ts: 但是,我还是认为抛弃科技生活还是不会被简化,反而会产生复杂的情况。However, I do not think that life will be simplified if we do not use technology. On the contrary, it is likely to breed a more complex situation.

Ss:如果我们因为受到诈骗或者荒谬言论的困扰就不去使用智能手机或者网络,我们交流的效率就会大幅降低。If we abandon smart phones or the Internet because we are bombarded with scams or fallacies, efficiency of communication will be greatly undermined. 同样如此,冲水马桶会消耗大量的淡水,但是如果禁止使用冲水马桶,(障)环境卫生就变得不可能。Similarly, flush toilets usually consume considerable amount of fresh water, but sanitation would be out of the question if they are banned. (我)甚至很难想象具有导航定位、监控恐怖活动以及(提供)观看电视功能的卫星被抛弃之后生活会是什么样。It is even hard to imagine a world without satellites, which are in charge of GPS, surveillance or terrors and television viewing. 我们已经习惯了快节奏且灵活的生活方式,想改变它是很不明智的。We have been accustomed to this fast-paced and flexible way of life, it is not wise to change.

Conclusion

后,科技推动了社会进步,也带来了非常多的好处。In conclusion,technology is an important factor that pushes society forward, and it offers far more benefits. 我们面对技术带来的问题的时候不需要退缩,因为这些问题可以通过技术进步得到缓解。We do not need to regress when we are faced with its problems because they can be alleviated by technological advances.

考试预测:

1.小作文:重点关注线图、饼图、柱图

2.大作文:重点关注社会类、教育类话题。

3.重点浏览12-14年写作机经,可借助《范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

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