2019年4月6日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文：Bar ：Global sales in different types of digital games.

　　大作文：Some people think the best way to reduce the time traveling to work is to replace the parks and gardens in city centers with apartment buildings, where commuters live in. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

　　朗阁讲师杨钰点评

　　1.本次考试难度中等。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：动态柱状图：2000-2006年，各种类型电子游戏在世界的销量变化。

　　注意：1. 动态图，着重抓住趋势变化;2.注意时间为2000-2006年，选用过去时;3. 图表中的数据不需要都提及，注意数据的整合。

　　相关表达：

　　1、It is clear from the chart given that .....increased/decreased dramatically from 2000 to 2006 .

　　2、The year 200X saw/witnessed a significant drop/growth in...., with a decline/rise of+数据.

　　3、There was a slight rise/fall in .... during the period shown in the question, growing/ declining from... to ....

　　3.Task 2 城市工作类话题

　　题目翻译：人们花很多时间在通勤上，有人认为最好的方法是改造公园，建更多离工作地点更近的公寓，有些人不同意。讨论双方观点。

　　从话题上来说，属于城市工作类，考生可以运用平时对此话题的积累加以论证。

　　从类型上来说，属于议论文中的双边类，考生只要从合理的角度展开言论，言之有理即可。

　　从结构上来说，可以采取四段式的写法：

　　第一段：题目改写+个人观点。

　　第二段：讨论甲方观点。

　　第三段：讨论乙方观点+提出解决方案。

　　第四段：总结段-重申观点。

　　主体段 1:

　　支持的论点：

　　1. 上班距离近，节约上下班时间：This would enable commuters to live close to the company. Therefore, every day in the rush hour, this would definitely save certain amount of time on traveling to and from work

　　主体段 2:

　　反对的论点：

　　1. 公园的休闲功能：Parks and gardens are considered to play an important role in the well-being of modern citizens, since they provide an escape for workers after an intensive day-time work;

　　2. 公园的环保功能：It is also argued that parks could make huge contribution to environmental protection, such as absorbing carbon dioxide emitted by increasing vehicles in urban areas. Without them, the quality of life in city would be greatly damaged.

　　提供解决方案：

　　1. 大力发展公共交通： The construction of public transport services in urban areas should be optimized so that the pressure in many main roads can be relieved.

　　2. 工厂迁移至郊区： Instead of replacing the parks and gardens in city centers with apartment buildings, priority of development in village areas should be given by relocating factories and companies in rural places.

　　考试预测

　　1.小作文：重点关注地图、表格、混合图(动态图为主、静态图为辅)。

　　2.大作文：重点关注科技媒体、教育文化话题。

　　3.重点浏览2015-2016年写作机经，可借助《高分范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。