南京朗阁8月1日雅思写作考题回顾

　　小作文: 表格，几个国家的机动车保有情况对比。

　　大作文：Some people think that all children should learn about history at school. Others, however, believe that other subjects are more relevant to children's lives today. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(2013年5月18日原题)

　　朗阁讲师郑世琦点评

　　1.本次考试Task 1难度中等，Task 2难度中等。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：表格，几个国家的机动车保有情况对比。

　　注意：此次小作文属于常规静态图，首先需要注意数据的挑选，不可都写，也不能介绍的数据过少，可以进行排序表达和对比数据的方式推进文章。

　　相关表达：

　　1、A is +形容词比较级+than B

　　2、A is +倍数+as+形容词原级+as B

　　3、(将A的数据表达清楚)，followed by B and then C

　　4、(将A和B进行比较)，and C the least

　　5、As to / Turning to / In terms of …

　　Task 2: 教育类话题，双边问法。

　　题目翻译：有些人认为所有的孩子都应该在学校学习历史，其他人认为其他的学科对孩子们当下更有关联一些，讨论双方观点并且给出自己的观点。

　　题目解析：

　　话题看似比较贴近学生生活，但是有不少同学没有真正思考过这个话题，容易写的僵硬，容易千篇一律。

　　没有思路的同学不妨思考一下，上历史课到底学到了什么?“除了王朝更迭，殖民，移民，冲突，战争;还有生存方式，饮食习惯，宗教信仰，女权运动，奴隶解放，等等所有这些”如果能与当下学术学习/生活方式/价值观建立联系，那么恭喜同学，你已经有思路可以写应该学习历史了。反之一样。

　　参考范文

　　开头段： Background+我的观点

　　School curriculum design has always been a common concern for the authorities, schoolteachers and parents as well, and history is one of the subjects causing a debate. While some people cannot see its relevance to our current life, I’d like to emphasize its importance in modern society.

　　主体段1: 有些人认为历史都是过去的事情，现在的世界已经大变样，所以历史跟现在没有关系。所以他们认为学历史是浪费时间。

　　Those who advocate the elimination of history see things in separate rather than inconnection. They presume that history is about everything that happened in the past， therefore has nothing to do with our present life which has changed into a completely different world. They claim that studying history is a waste of time and should be removed from school class.

　　主体段2: 但是，正是因为历史一直在变，我们更应该去抓住一些规律。我认为如果我们更好的诠释历史，我们就能更好的对待我们现在的生活。

　　However, it is because of the constant change of the world that we need to grasp something unchangeable which can always be found in the study of history. This interpretation of the subject of history is blind to the general principles presented in the past.

　　主体段3：换言之，历史可以更好的教会孩子世界的改变，发展他们的识别，辨别，适应能力。历史同样能够更好的帮助孩子理解地区文化和种族特性。

　　It is said that there is nothing new in the world, which applies that we can draw on the experience of our ancestors. History helps children to better and deeper understand the changing world and develop sensibility, judgment and adaptability to their personal life and the society. Such qualities help students to avoid many mistakes and better prepare for their successful and rewarding future life. In addition, history is also about culture and tradition due to its regional and racial features. It reminds us of our root and enhances our identity. Children learning history can better appreciate their traditional culture.

　　结尾段： 强调个人观点

　　To sum up, history is a best way for us to see the current world and predict the future. History is especially important for children to learn because it makes them more aware of themselves and the world and provide cultural identity as well.

　　考试预测

　　1.小作文：重点关注饼图、线图、继续预警流程图和地图。

　　2.大作文：重点关住教育、社会生活和环境类话题。

　　3.重点浏览13年到14年写作机经，可借助《高分范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。