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时间:2017-07-31 14:48来源:朗阁小编作者:don

提升文章质量,是新sat写作备考生取得的基础!可是,如何提高新sat写作质量呢?

1.多运用动词和主动语态

  在文章中把一个主要的名词换成动词。

  Verb to be :the use of leaf blowers before 8 am is a violation of local noise abatement laws.

  Action verb :the use of leaf blowers before 8 am violates local noise abatement laws.

  2.在文章中使用specific words

  少general words,多增加specific images。这两者怎么区别呢?我们来举个例子,car就是general words,因为车的种类有很多,而Benz SUV 就是specific words。在考试的中,多使用specific words可以帮助把物体解释的清楚,读者也会获得多的信息,使他们对你的文章方便了解。

  General :Tom got into his car and drove off.

  Specific :Tom leaped into his SUV and roared off.

  3.用动词替代句子中的某一个重要的名词或形容词

  Verb to be :The quarterback’s wretched performance was a disgrace to his team.

  Action verb :The quarterback’s wretched performance humiliated his team.

  4.使用简单词汇

  在新sat写作中,有的同学习惯使用一些例如 ugly as sin, pretty as a picture之类的词汇。在这里,建议大家不要使用这类词汇。因为新sat写作备考生们在使用这些词汇的时候,会给读者一种陈词滥调、平淡无味的感觉,有可能使读者误会你本身的意思。

  General :I was shaking in my boots before the interview,but I was happy as a lark when the personnel manager offered me the job.

  Improved :I was terrified before the interview, but I was ecstatic when the personnel manager offered me the job.

  5.避免使用俚语

  新sat的写作,要求的是一篇有专业性的写作,而不是一篇日记或随笔,所以俚语不应该在sat的考试中出现。就好像是高考作文中,考生把“我要去…”写成“俺要去…”加有地方方言的语言方式。

  例:Brian’s mother reprimanded him for blowing his physic test.

  Improved :Brian’s mother reprimanded him for failing his physic test.

  写作的时候,尽量的使用简单易懂的词汇语句,可以使读者清楚的明白你的立场和你文章的目的。要记住,sat写作不是考察你的生词量,而是在考察你是否能将你的想法通过文字的方式传递给读者。

  例 :To facilitate input by the maximum number of potential purchasers, questionnaires were designed and posted well in advance of the launch of the promotional marketing campaign.

  Improved :Before we began advertising, we designed and mailed a marketing survey to find out what customers were looking for.

  通过比较,我们可以清楚的明白,上面的句子,使用了一些不必要的词汇,而导致句子看上去繁琐难懂。下面的句子,经过编改,变得简单易懂。

  6.合并短句,截断长句

  合并短句可以让你的文章连贯,读者阅读的时候思路也会清晰。

  例:The glee club held a fund-raiser, the basketball team also held a fundraiser.

  Improved sentences :The glee club and the basketball team held fundraisers (compound subject)。

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