新托福写作错误汇总

新托福写作考生经常会犯很多错误，以下13句句子是在考生平时练习里找到的常见类型的病句，并做了修改，看看你犯过这些错误嘛?

　　病句1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

　　病句2. For example， you work in a big factory。

　　改进： Suppose you work in a big factory。

　　病句3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

　　病句4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

　　改进： We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

　　病句5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

　　改进： He will get a higher salary， thus improving his life。

　　病句6. Their brain is still very young。

　　改进： They are still immature。

　　病句7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

　　改进： Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

　　病句8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

　　改进： They cannot tell right from wrong。

　　病句9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。

　　改进： It will help children learn to make good use of time。

　　病句10. Though it is not the best job， it afford to his life。

　　改进： Though it is not the best job， a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

　　病句11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation， they want further development。

　　改进： Since people are never satisfied with their status quo， they want further development。

　　病句12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。

　　改进： The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

　　病句13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。

　　改进： They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。