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时间:2012-04-07 14:38来源:朗阁小编作者:sailor

       Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. ? automobiles ? bicycles ? airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

       写作思路:

       飞机改变了人们的生活

    (1)飞机使人们能够迅速地到达目的地,节省了时间。

    (2)飞机还提供了很多的就业机会,这使得很多梦想能够飞上蓝天的人得到了机会

    (3)飞机还使旅行为安全。

        参考范文:

       The modern society have been changed by the enormous impact of the invention of the transportantion, such as the automobile, which has become indispensable in the daily live. The automobiles are so popular that almost every family or even everyone has one. Since the function and effect of automobile is known by everyone. In this essay, I would discuss another invention of the transportantion that is as important as the automobile in the modern society, the plane. As far as I am concerned, these are three conspicous aspects as follows.

      The main reason for my propensity to choose plane is that plane is the vehicle used by people most frequently. Usually, people drive car in short way, while they take plane in long travel. The most important reason people choose it for long distance is that the speed of plane is much faster than others. The invention of plane create a compeletely new live. Nowadays, we can travel around the earth within twenty-four hours, that is something say we can reach any place of the word in one day. And there are many people who live in a place and work in the other city even the other nation, for the plane can bring them go home in weekend.

      Another reason can be seen by every person is that plane is known as one of the most safe and convenient vehicles. It is reported from the relative data that the accident ratio of the plane is far under that of the train, the ship, the automobile and any other else. With the developenment of the hi-tech, faster, safer and more comfortable plane are made.Since the supersonic plane appears, both speed and security rapidly improve.Furthermore, new type plane provide various of the equipments to alleviate the fatigue of the passengers and improve the degree of comfort.

      In addition, the charge for taking plane is affordable to common person. Similar to the most family can take enough money to buy a car, most people have enough money to buy a ticket of plane.

      Especially, there are so many discounts for students,old men and children by the ailine company.

     General speaking, the new technology has brought many invention to us in the modern society. Taking into account of all these things, we may reach the conclusion that as a important transportantion vehicle the plane changes our daily live and at the same time brings the enormous influence to the modern society.

 

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