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时间:2012-04-07 14:37来源:朗阁小编作者:sailor

        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

       写作思路:

      在家看电视比参加现场表演好

    (1)现场表演有可能看不清楚,需要考虑票价和座位位置

    (2)室外场地的表演受天气状况影响

    (3)观看现场表演会浪费来回交通的时间

       参考范文:

      Some people like attending live performance rather than watching the same event on television. They think that will be enjoyable. Others like me, however, do not think so. There are no less than three disadvantages in attending a live performance rendered below:

      First and foremost,people who will go to a live performance may not see or lister to clearly. Not all seats there are the best place.May be you will feel disappionted after attending it,and you must think the price for ticket is not worth that.

      There is another factor that deserves some words here.The quality of the performance will depends on some external factors.Suppose that you go to a concert outdoors.Before you leave home, you have to consider how the whether will be go.It is likely that audiances are wet because of rain during the performance.So, even though the performance is in high quality,you may not feel comfortable more or less.

      In addition, attending a live performance may waste your time. You must go there ahead of time,and you have to park.That will spend much time.

      I can not deny that attending a live performance has its own merits.Nonetheless,based on the above discussion, I strongly disagree with the opionion that attending a live performance is more enjoyable.

 

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