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2016年11月26日雅思考试写作回顾

时间:2016-11-28 14:26来源:朗阁小编作者:don

 

2016年11月26日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文: flow chart

大作文:More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face-to-face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

朗阁讲师倪昊婧点评

1. 本次考试难度较难。

2. 整体分析:

Task 1 流程图,两个图表对比,black coal与brown coal在发电过程中的损耗情况

注意点:1.注意按照步骤描述各阶段的能源流失情况  2.注意两者之间的比较和连接词的使用  3. 注意词汇的词形变化,增加句型丰富性

 

相关表达:

1.  A shows a different + 比较内容+ compared with B

2.  A and B are similar/ are in similar/same quantities

3.  in the first stage/ at the initial stage/ the process starts from n.

4.  in the following stage/ after that/ in the next step

5.  in the final phase/ at last/ n. is the last step in the procedure

 

3. Task2社会类话题

题目翻译:越来越多的人选择使用手机和电脑交流,所以人们正在逐渐失去面对面交流的能力。你同意还是不同意?

这个题目讨论的点主要是使用手机和电脑交流是否会导致人们失去面对面交流的能力,所以文章在构思内容上应该关注的重点是面对面交流的能力。如果同意,则支持使用手机和电脑交流会导致人们失去面对面交流的能力;如果不同意,则认为使用手机和电脑交流不会导致人们失去面对面交流的能力。

 

IntroductionWhen it comes to the issue about the influence brought by the pervasive use of technologies, some people argue that devices like mobile phones and computers do cause a damage to the ability of communicating face to face, but I cannot agree with this opinion.

 

(观点11. 众所周知通过电话和电脑可以进行面对面的视频交流,这和实际的面对面交流没有什么区别(It is known that computers and mobile phones facilitate face-to-face communication with the function of video chat.). 通过视频,人们可以在屏幕上看见对方(people could see each other on the screen). 在视频交流过程中,人们可以观察对方的身体语言和表情手势等,从而帮助他们好的交流(during the video communication, people can observe and interpret body language of others, as well as gestures and emotions, to help them enjoy a better chat). 这与实际生活中的面对面交流所需要的能力是一样的(This is the same as the ability to communicate face to face in real life). 2. 通过电话电脑聊天和面对面交流一样,都需要注意措辞(both chatting by phone and face-to-face communication need to pay attention to the wording). 在与人交流的时候,谈话双方都应该考虑到对方,注意到用词和交流的目的等(when people are in a chat, both of whom should take each other’s feelings into account, concerning about the words, the purpose of the communication and so forth),这种实际交往的能力不会因为通讯工具而消失(This communication ability will not disappear because of the emergence of communication tools).

 

(观点2不可否认,手机和网络的确会降低人们面对面交流的兴趣和热情(there is no denying that the rise of cell phone and social websites will dampen the enthusiasm and interest for face-to-face communication.). 现代社会很多人在聚会时宁愿选择玩手机游戏,在网上发照片,也不愿意与身边的亲朋聊天交流(nowadays, a lot of people attempt to post their photos online or play phone games rather than talking to people who sit closely to them). 因为手机,网络具有这样一些有趣的高科技的功能(for the reason that there are some cutting-edging functions in smart phones and computers), 对人们来说这比聊天交流具有吸引力(which is more attractive than face to face communication).

 

ConclusionIn conclusion, although mobile phone and the computer greatly affect the way of communication, people can still make offline communication with each other successfully.

 

考试预测

1. 小作文:重点关注线图、柱图、饼图

2. 大作文:多关注社会、政府、媒体类话题。

3. 重点浏览11-14年写作机经,可借助《范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

 

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