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2017年6月17日雅思考试写作回顾

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2017617日雅思考试写作回顾

 

小作文:The map below shows a number of different ways of visiting Mountain Eron in a National Park. Give details of the ways and compare them where possible. 

 

大作文:Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young people university educated, others think sending young people to universities only leads to graduates unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

朗阁罗婧依点评:

1.本次考试难度中等

 

2.整体分析

Task 1:地图选址题。概况:Mountain Eron 的三个观赏点。一个是road, 一个是walking track, 一个是climbing track。山旁有卫生间,停车场等图标。

 

思路:客观描述Mountain Eron的每个观赏点的地理位置与旁边的建筑。

 

相关表达:

短语:

be situated / located in (位于), link=connect (连接), give convenience to, it is convenient for sb. to do.

句型:

被动语态:be done

定语从句(限制和非限制性定语从句)

后置定语(定语位于名词后)

倒装句(部分倒装句和全部倒装句)

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3.Task 2教育类(大学教育)双边题

题目翻译:一些人认为,有大量受过高等教育的年轻人,对一个国家是很有好处的。其他人认为把年轻人送到大学里去只会导致毕业生失业。讨论双方观点,并给出你的看法。

 

思路:双边类型,需要对双方的观点进行详细的论证证明其观点合理性。结尾段落呈现自己的观点并且给出相关建议。

 

原创范文:

Background: (背景介绍)

为了适应越来越激烈的社会竞争和日新月异的社会变化,多的年轻人在努力拼搏,进入理想的大学,接受高等教育。大学不仅可以教会年轻人所需要的竞争技能和知识和提供他们去找高薪而且有前景工作的必备学历,还可以让他们有结识和他们一样有理想有抱负的同龄人的机会。所以,年轻人接受高等教育已经成为社会发展的必然趋势。

In order to adapt to fiercer and fiercer competition and ever-changing in the modern society, more and more young adults are endeavoring in and struggling for entering ideal universities to receive the higher education. For the majority of young people, universities not only do educate them essential technology and knowledge they need and provide necessary qualifications and certificates that is requested in high-salary and promising professions, but also offer them chances to get acquainted with peers who possess the same ambition and aspiration. As a result, it has been becoming an inevitable trend for young adults to increasingly take in the university education.

 

Body 1: (讨论个观点)                                                                                                                                

一个国家拥有大量受过高等教育的人才,确实对国家很有好处。大量具备高等教育的人

才,可以提升全民素质和意识。生活中或者工作中遇到棘手的事情,会理智地去处理而

不是冲动为之导致犯罪。意识到从自身做起去护环境,营造一个好的生活环境。还

对国家的科技进步和教育发展做出巨大贡献。

A country, absolutely, benefits from a large number of talents with well-educated

owing that quality and awareness of the whole citizens could be promoted. Intractable

stuffs which people suffer from daily life and in the period of working are solved

reasonably and wisely in all probability instead of impulsive behavior that leads to

crime committing. Furthermore, having certain realization to protect the environment

surrounding through self-actions and cultivate a more favorable living conditions and

environment. The most important is that contribution from these talents with

well-educated is giant on the increasingly advance of technology and the rapid

development of education career.

Body 2: (讨论第二个观点)

教育是一个国家发展的根本,教育的发展给一个国家带来很明显的优势。因此,国家鼓励大学扩大招生,为国家培养多的人才。但是,由于急速的生源扩张和市场部分人才需求饱和之间出现了短时间不能解决的矛盾,因此,很多接受过高等教育的年轻人一毕业就面临失业。经常会出现一个岗位多人争夺,比如管理岗位。或者是成绩优良的大学生在做和高中毕业生一样的职位。

Education is the fundamental site, and which brings obviously advantages to a country. Therefore, countries encourage universities to expand the enrolling of students and put it into effect to cultivate many more talents. Nevertheless, the contradiction and conflict being not resolved which appears between high-speed expansion of enrolling students and saturation of demanding students in some segment labor positions. This condition causes many young and well-educated adults encounter unemployment as soon as they graduate from university. Contenting for a vacuum position among crowded graduates always occur in labor market like management or a postgraduate with a good transcript carries on the same occupation with another graduates from high school to earn the same.

 

Conclusion(同意个观点)

人和人的观点都不同。任何一个观点都有两面。我个人同意个观点。一个国家的发展确实离不开高质量的人才。但同时,也要注意的是,国家在培养人才的时候,要注意多样性和分层教育,避免人才堆积,让每个毕业生都能找到合适自己的职业。

Views on the issue in question vary from person to person and any view has pro and con. According to analysis above, I agree with the first one. Obviously, the development of a country surely connect with numerous high-qualification talents. But meanwhile, what is also with noticing is that a country should pay more attention to diversity and hierarchy in education to avoid heaping up and wasting in talents and finally facilitate every graduate is able to find a suitable job position.

考试预测:

1.小作文:重点关注流程图、地图题

2.大作文:重点关住社会类、媒体、教育和动物话题。

3.重点浏览15年写作机经,可借助《范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

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